12.6.09 (a working draft...this needs revision, and i need ideas for it...)
We were surprisingly pure white
like the whiskers of a man
grown old overnight by
some old dark magic.
Though we’d spent years in
that soot-dimmed room
trying to make sense out
of the smoke and ashes.
Though we’d walked miles in
that fenced-in garden
carving circles of regret
in the unwilling dirt.
We were surprisingly pure white
like the fur of the rabbit
pulled unexpectedly out of
some old black hat.
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